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(C + C) Naturally Three Headed

on: March 11, 2015, 10:05:24 pm
 :yell: I wish to see that I've done a good job(I believe so) with this creature I'd love the advice It is a slime monster that I need to know how to make it look better I also need help with shading

Naturally Three Headed


Naturally Three Headed - Edit


Naturally Three Headed - Edit 2


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« Last Edit: March 17, 2015, 01:41:26 am by Pinux »

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Re: (C + C) Naturally Three Headed

Reply #1 on: March 11, 2015, 10:51:43 pm
We might need some context behind it. It looks like a 3 headed slime monster of sorts? What is it supposed to be used for?

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Re: (C + C) Naturally Three Headed

Reply #2 on: March 11, 2015, 10:57:20 pm
We might need some context behind it. It looks like a 3 headed slime monster of sorts? What is it supposed to be used for?
Sorry About that let me fix that, and it is a slime monster
« Last Edit: March 15, 2015, 08:03:01 pm by Pinux »

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Re: (C + C) Naturally Three Headed

Reply #3 on: March 14, 2015, 02:37:57 am
Well, if is a 3 head slime monster i need to say it looks more mossy than slimy...

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Re: (C + C) Naturally Three Headed

Reply #4 on: March 14, 2015, 04:02:37 pm
Well, if is a 3 head slime monster i need to say it looks more mossy than slimy...
It does actually but I just don't know what I should do from here

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Re: (C + C) Naturally Three Headed

Reply #5 on: March 14, 2015, 04:32:37 pm
Made a quick edit of your slime to outline the biggest issue I saw with it. That being the dithering on the shading. The dithering gave him a rougher texture look rather than a shiny surface look.
Hopefully you can see the difference I have made in my edit:

There are a few problems with the shadows still and the light source seems to be inconsistent. I made a wee edit on the shadow of the right-most head, from that I hope you can see how I have shaped his head to be rounder and more pronounced. The last thing I would say about the entire piece is that he seems a little off balance with the left head so far out there. I personally think he would look good with just two heads but whatever.
Keep working at it!  :)

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Re: (C + C) Naturally Three Headed

Reply #6 on: March 14, 2015, 05:25:31 pm
Made a quick edit of your slime to outline the biggest issue I saw with it. That being the dithering on the shading. The dithering gave him a rougher texture look rather than a shiny surface look.
Hopefully you can see the difference I have made in my edit:

There are a few problems with the shadows still and the light source seems to be inconsistent. I made a wee edit on the shadow of the right-most head, from that I hope you can see how I have shaped his head to be rounder and more pronounced. The last thing I would say about the entire piece is that he seems a little off balance with the left head so far out there. I personally think he would look good with just two heads but whatever.
Keep working at it!  :)

I love it!  :lol: Its way better Thank you and Not to mention I kinda now think I don't like the head sticking out, Ill just change it

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Re: (C + C) Naturally Three Headed

Reply #7 on: March 14, 2015, 05:51:02 pm

Naturally Three Headed - Edit
« Last Edit: March 14, 2015, 06:10:25 pm by Pinux »

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Re: (C + C) Naturally Three Headed

Reply #8 on: March 14, 2015, 07:24:54 pm
The slime drops could have diverse volume.

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Re: (C + C) Naturally Three Headed

Reply #9 on: March 14, 2015, 11:31:24 pm
The slime drops could have diverse volume.
I'll try it out and see, Thank you and should I make some in different sizes too?