Help with KOS portrait? Please? UPDATED 08-14

[Ryumaru]

i made an edit to help you with using your colors maximaly, and i got rid of some colors to maybe make it easier to work on the shirt

i probably over did it tho.

[eghost]

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I'm tinkering with the palette some, up the sat. & brightness on the new color...I think I may go for a light from below as you suggested Adarias...

Hopefully it's improving...The update I'm saving as an alternate coloring, just in case I look back at this on my CRT and wonder what I was thinking...

Again, the help is appreciated...The size of this piece is way outside of my comfort zone, so I'm grateful for all the help I get...

[eghost]

Pardon my dbl post...But here's an update...



The arms have only been blobbed in, still need cleanup there....
Also, the two blue dots on the top of the wrench are for AA purposes, since the background on the portrait display is black...
Aside from the blobbiness of the arms, is the anatomy still OK?

Thanks again everyone! 

[Scuba Steve]

How about making the wrench a bit more dynamic rather than parallel to the floor and directly from the side.  Slightly angled up and turned a bit to see the front a bit.