Seeking CnC (WIPs)

[nitewalkr]

Greetings and Salutations;

Hi there I have been lurking around for a while and today I finally decided to post since I have something to present and get some feedback. These pieces are going to be a part of the game that I am working on. Also I am learning all this as I go so I will keep on updating this thread if it is ok with the admins.

Female character:

Mob spawn portal:

Hell gate:


CnC is welcome and appreciated thanks.

NOTE: Also I would also appreciate it if someone can post an appropriate size for characters, and props. this character was done in 64, skull mob spawn was done in 32 (I think) and hell gate was done in 128

[nitewalkr]

a little bit of an update before start working on the mob pieces:





EDIT: Also; the mob spawn had to be the same size as the character so there fore both character and the mob spawn portal is of the same size 64x64

[Theoden]

Looks great.

[Candy Man Criminal]

im in love with the skull portal, but it feel a bit slow
if you want it to still open at roughly that speed, maybe try to make it like the skull its trying to keep its mouth shut

[nitewalkr]

skull portal! thank you! much better then mob spawn portal.

I'll see what I can do about force closing the mouth but the idea was like the skull would spawn and starts opening up while mob starts forcing their selves in to our dimension from the other dimension. The skull portals start appearing when the gate appears at the background (I am still trying to figure out how to make this sync together.) That could work I guess.

Any critique on the character and her still animation and hell gate?

[Candy Man Criminal]

the hell gate needs something filling in the blank spaces, even just a texture
the skull at the top could use some depth, too

and the character looks great, tho the face has little readability
her animation might move a bit too much for just breathing
having it run down the entirety of the legs might be a bit much

also are the bits of her hair supposed to stick out?

overall this is great stuff, cant wait to see how this all ends up =]

[nitewalkr]

that was a still animation, as in, if she would stand for a while she would be animated like that. I had other ideas for her hair so this isnt carved in stone I will see if I can get it done soon.

currently I also have been working on one piece of mob for my first game set to test things out as I wont be using any ready made game tools but raw programming instead.



This is one type of mob that would drop from the mob spawn portal (skull portal.)

[lachrymose]

I don't like the idle animation, its so easy to follow the wave of motion up and down her body. Its like she is trying to do the worm while she is standing up.

[Candy Man Criminal]

The girl legs are stretching when inhaling, this feels unnatural. try instead to only move her upper torso. fill it with air so her chest bends outward a bit.

from another thread, but applies here

[nitewalkr]

I will re-work the animation of this character. Since I am just starting out I think it would be wise to give her a gun or something and then make the idle animation.

this is something else that I've been working on.



This is just beginner's space ship game that popped in my head thought I should share my progress here as well for everything until I am satisfied with my style.