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Offline JWW

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on: August 16, 2006, 12:19:07 am
I'm workin on this portrait but i can't decide whether to keep this ambient light or not.  Let me know what you think and c+c is welcome. =)
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Re: portrait

Reply #1 on: August 16, 2006, 12:32:05 am
Looks great so far. I'd say keep the ambient lighting, as for the moment it helps give the piece more depth.

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Re: portrait

Reply #2 on: August 16, 2006, 01:06:34 am
love it  :D.. yeah keep the ambient lighting..

Im tryin to get hair similar to that, atm I've just got a wog..  :-[ , it helps to wear a hat  8)

keep it up, just don't let the neck make it look as if he'd bending to the right..
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Re: portrait

Reply #3 on: August 16, 2006, 01:34:47 am
thanks larwick and terley =)

and thanks for the heads up about the neck, ill make sure not to do that.

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Re: portrait

Reply #4 on: August 16, 2006, 03:40:04 am
 The ambient really did make a cool effect. Looks like a WIP.

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Re: portrait

Reply #5 on: August 16, 2006, 05:24:02 am
thanks =) yea its most definitely a wip :F, i just needed to get opinions on the ambience before i went further.

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Re: portrait

Reply #6 on: August 16, 2006, 06:30:49 am
Looks too sexy. Something seems weird with the face though, near the mouth area.

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Re: portrait

Reply #7 on: August 16, 2006, 04:18:56 pm
i'd say keep the rim lighting... But then I would wouldn't I ?

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Re: portrait

Reply #8 on: August 16, 2006, 05:23:19 pm
@ryuria
thanks, but your comment isnt too helpful :/
@baccaman21
=P ok

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Re: portrait

Reply #9 on: August 16, 2006, 05:58:49 pm
It looks good to me either with or without light - if it's stand alone portrait.
But I would definetly kill that shiness on his hose it looks like zit a bit.=)