AuthorTopic: Looking for Critique!  (Read 1760 times)

Offline Emerald371

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Looking for Critique!

on: January 30, 2015, 07:29:26 pm
I started this picture and before I knew it, I was done, although I'm not sure it is as good as it can be. Any suggestions for what i can work on?


Here is the edits I have made! What do you all think?
« Last Edit: February 02, 2015, 04:36:26 pm by Emerald371 »

Offline Cruckz

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Re: Looking for Critique!

Reply #1 on: February 01, 2015, 12:49:58 pm
Love the colours! got a very similar colour pallet I have just been working with <3

ok so I would lower your mountains in the background as it obscures the silhouette of the bridge and ruins the composition a little it will also give a greater feeling of height. I'd also give the bridge a bit more information if you can, its very flat along the top and supporting struts maybe adding a bit more too it could break it up a little. Also the character is meant to be the main focus however is not on the rule of thirds and the sweeping vine only distracts the viewers eye.


did a super quick paintover, sorry the foreground elements still need work imo.


Hope it helps