AuthorTopic: A green thing and a candyman  (Read 5046 times)

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Re: A green thing and a candyman

Reply #10 on: August 10, 2006, 11:14:03 pm
I do say his hands are small compared with the arms, mostly the one with the axe.

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Re: A green thing and a candyman

Reply #11 on: August 11, 2006, 01:56:10 am
theres parts of this I really think looks nice, the legs, the axe and parts of the muscle shading but I think from the waist up theres a lot of problems.

neaten it up a bit, use the 4 skin shades to your advantage especially the one your using to highlight, we need to see more of that.

hope you don't mind, editted slightly.. just fixed some bits.



even spruce up the colours a bit, it looks a bit dull and faded.



nice character..
« Last Edit: August 11, 2006, 01:57:50 am by Terley »
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Re: A green thing and a candyman

Reply #12 on: August 11, 2006, 08:33:41 am
Thanks all for your comments. They've been very helpful and useful. Here is the latest version, which I must say has improved quite a lot from the first version I posted.

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Re: A green thing and a candyman

Reply #13 on: August 14, 2006, 08:55:14 pm
Excuse the double posting, but I just wanted to post what I would like to call the final version of this (even though I'm not 100% satisfied with it yet).

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Re: A green thing and a candyman

Reply #14 on: August 15, 2006, 11:11:41 pm
I still really like this, some more edits would help this more, like making the transaction between his side and his shorts, atm it looks like his shorts are too tight around the waist..

this is a better edit than my last one, friendlier on the eyes..


you should use the colours on the shorts to help give the orc's skin a bit more colour, if you tweak the colours through trial and error you'll find that they help blend both the green and the red.. You see nothing is just one shade of one colour, our skin for example isn't just peach, we have blue's, red's and yellows..

some dithering would help..
« Last Edit: August 15, 2006, 11:26:12 pm by Terley »
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