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Offline Fizzick

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Ork Ship

on: December 16, 2014, 10:12:13 pm
i already postedx this to pixel joint but i have decided to work on it more in regards to pixel refinement.
before i begin, what kind of color/structure changes do you think would be interesting?

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Re: Ork Ship

Reply #1 on: December 17, 2014, 12:19:15 am
Cool.

Is it a crashed dropship?
Or some kind of tall tank like thingy?

Can't quite make out forms.
Can't tell how it moves itself around.

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Re: Ork Ship

Reply #2 on: December 17, 2014, 04:49:48 am
It's some kind of space ship that crashed it on its nose.

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Re: Ork Ship

Reply #3 on: December 17, 2014, 02:45:16 pm
Pretty cool.  I really like your palette.

I could tell it was some kind of crashed rocket / jet built out of junk.  If you want to make that more obvious, you could make that wing on the left side bigger.  Aside from that, the ship looks good.

I don't know what you have planned for the background, but right now those trees are a little distracting, the way they seem to make a straight line across the top of the image. There doesn't seem to be any variation in height or distance.