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Offline Motrox

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[WIP] West Bank

on: July 27, 2014, 10:30:54 pm
Started this last night and I'm moving along pretty well.
If anyone has any CC, especially on the palette because I think it looks awful right now. That would be great.






Update   :crazy:
Still looking for suggestions and edits.
« Last Edit: July 28, 2014, 07:54:20 pm by PixelPiledriver »

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Re: [WIP] West Bank

Reply #1 on: July 28, 2014, 06:39:12 am
Maybe curve the writing across the wall to make it follow the perspective of the wall a little? The bottom (and top) of the wall follow curves - I think the writing would look better if it had a little perspective to it as well.

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Re: [WIP] West Bank

Reply #2 on: July 28, 2014, 03:17:42 pm
Thanks for the suggestion.
I'll work on that right now.



How's this?
« Last Edit: July 28, 2014, 07:54:36 pm by PixelPiledriver »

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Re: [WIP] West Bank

Reply #3 on: July 28, 2014, 07:33:57 pm
Its almost impossible to read. But it does look way better.
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Re: [WIP] West Bank

Reply #4 on: July 30, 2014, 09:49:03 am
Its almost impossible to read. But it does look way better.

Agreed. I like what you did with the cracks too.

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Re: [WIP] West Bank

Reply #5 on: October 15, 2014, 01:44:21 am
It's been awhile..
I'm really busy so I haven't had much time to get back to this.
I did some palette touch ups and tried to get more detail into it. Readability is probably even worse then before but it's still not done.
Any suggestions or edits would be nice  :D


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Re: [WIP] West Bank

Reply #6 on: October 25, 2014, 06:47:32 pm
Hmmm... I think some barbed wire would add even more irony to the piece.