Here is my take on the hands. It's rough but I think you get the idea. Also tried to straighten out her stance a tad.

^^^ I like this one feels right.
makes it seem more like she is looking down in thought rather than looking at something on her hand.
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ehh, new page I guess. I was referring to EvilEye's edit
Just quote the post you're referring to in the future. Added it for you. -Crow