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Offline Druvan

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[Critique Request] Main Character

on: September 19, 2014, 08:24:17 pm
So i've been working on this character for some days now, i'm almost new to drawing this type of things but i think i got the catch of it now. But i still think i can do these animation better but i don't know how... Post what you think please

Running:
Right

Up

Down

Dive Roll:

Offline orotoros

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Re: [Critique Request] Main Character

Reply #1 on: October 17, 2014, 05:51:39 pm
I'm pretty new to this stuff too but i think the up and down animations look too similar.

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Re: [Critique Request] Main Character

Reply #2 on: October 18, 2014, 05:38:40 pm
On the up and down animations, the character's thighs should be bulkier to match the other two anims. I like the stick lower legs though  :)
On the dive roll, the frame with the 3 diagonal-looking lines looks weird in motion. Maybe bend the character's torso deeper to avoid overstretching the arms, or place the arms/legs differently?