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Offline xylas

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[C+C] 32x32 Game girl sprite

on: September 09, 2014, 02:52:41 pm




Yeah, it's Vivian James. This is the first pixel art I've done in a long while and I thought it turned out pretty good but I'd like some feedback on what could be improved.

Edit: added a 1:1 gif
« Last Edit: September 09, 2014, 04:46:21 pm by xylas »

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Re: [C+C] 32x32 Game girl sprite

Reply #1 on: September 09, 2014, 03:35:39 pm
The step-stepping legs and feet are cute. The jitteryness of the hair is a bit distracting. The 4ch clover could be more readable if you increased the size a bit, and used the darker green in the middle to make the leaves pop a bit more. Maybe reuse the pants colour or white to highlight the gun?
I'd post a 1x animated .gif to make it easier for people to post edits, this forum supports image resizing by clicking/shift-clicking images.

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Re: [C+C] 32x32 Game girl sprite

Reply #2 on: September 09, 2014, 04:50:00 pm


I made the clover larger and it does look better, and cuter. The gun is sort of a placeholder, depending on if I do anything with this, I might have it so different guns can be used. I'm not sure how to animate the hair better.

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Re: [C+C] 32x32 Game girl sprite

Reply #3 on: September 09, 2014, 10:00:48 pm
There are a lot of straight and parallel lines.. Try to break them up more, especially the body/hair which follows the same line.

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Re: [C+C] 32x32 Game girl sprite

Reply #4 on: September 10, 2014, 10:47:40 am
Vivian James? What is familiar to me is the Paul Robertson -ish style :P (the modular weapon also helps)

I'm not too sure of the black outlines (personal preference-- I know they're integral to the style), especially when the black 'pools', creating clusters instead of 1px lines.

To animate the hair, I think you should first off have a static version, and then work from there.
Maybe the hair should just bob backwards at the bottom, a little? I also am not experienced with animating hair :lol:

Nice work on the feet animation :)

Edit:
Literally just found out where the character is from, since this came up on my feed
http://metroidvanias.com/post/97097287543/vivian-vidya-test-i-dont-know-what-exactly
(I didn't bother to look up the name before :crazy:)
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Re: [C+C] 32x32 Game girl sprite

Reply #5 on: May 28, 2020, 10:10:14 am
can i use this for my game? Ill credit you