Roar, I guess. *Updated again, 08/08/06... Finished?*

[Blick]

Could you change the color of the cane? I can't help but see it as an extra long finger.

[Tremulant]

Updated again. Thanks for all the help, guys. I think I'm calling it done, unless there are any glaring problems (also, I might, if I feel like it later, add a background, some other characters, and make it a full scene).

Special thanks to Helm for shoving me, again, outside my usual borders, and ptoing for the cane idea, which saved me a lot of trouble, like.. y'know.. making the anatomy actually work

Updated: The cane was lightened (still look like a finger? maybe.. opinions'd cool), the background leg was added, some miscellaneous stuff was done.

Thanks again, guys. Your crits are invaluable; always a massive help.

_{edit: spelling.}

[Larwick]

Looks great... but i think the little snippet of leg/knee/foot makes that area seem flat. To me the closest knee is pointing away from him slightly, and therefore when i dont see his other leg doing the same, but following the closest leg, it seems quite odd. To me at least. Heheh.

[ptoing]

Hahahahaha, awsome. I was just joking about the cane, but it definately gives him more character. New new palette is top notch. Good stuff.

[Helm]

 

maybe this is a good idea to apply to the whole sprite? Light-dependant outlines and a less dithery direct overhead light on the back.

I tried putting in pure white for the brightest color. Maybe you'll like.

[ndchristie]

as a piece like this, i think the pure white works, though ive recently started trying to keep purest white out because you almost never see pure white and also it makes the actual lights (fire, etc) look brighter if it's only used there

this looks great, love the progress of it, and the cane