[C+C] Portrait [WIP]

[pyxelbit]

First try on a portrait and a slightly bigger sprite. Its not finished, but im having trouble refining it more. Any tips, critizism, edits welcome.




Also, first post! Hello everyone   

[Snow Fenrir]

Light source is defined and it's more fleshed out than most portraits I see 

I recommend changing the lock at the left side of her face so you can see the cheeck's outline and lower the cheeckbone a bit on the right side and flesh out her face a little bit more. So far it looks very skinny and the fact there is a lot going on in the line right under her eyes gives her a gollum-like appearance in my opinion. Her ear could be a little more flat as well.