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pyxelbit
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[C+C] Portrait [WIP]
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July 29, 2014, 12:11:20 pm
First try on a portrait and a slightly bigger sprite. Its not finished, but im having trouble refining it more. Any tips, critizism, edits welcome.
Also, first post! Hello everyone
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Snow Fenrir
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Re: [C+C] Portrait [WIP]
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July 29, 2014, 08:20:06 pm
Light source is defined and it's more fleshed out than most portraits I see
I recommend changing the lock at the left side of her face so you can see the cheeck's outline and lower the cheeckbone a bit on the right side and flesh out her face a little bit more. So far it looks very skinny and the fact there is a lot going on in the line right under her eyes gives her a gollum-like appearance in my opinion. Her ear could be a little more flat as well.
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