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Offline Farage

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Re: [WIP] Runner background

Reply #10 on: July 15, 2014, 03:19:23 am
I made these new clouds a little while, thanks for the feedback I have just received from you!



I'll do more edits based in your feedback :)

Wow, i actually got your concept completely wrong, you're doing a horizon from the ground!
My bad.
And the clouds got a really good improvement, nice!

~edit~
So here are my 2 cents, maybe you're trying to take a picture from your idea in a way too large scale, keeping it smaller and tight will make things to come together more easily.
Also, im not quite sure what you're trying to achieve with that gradient, are those mountains? Is that the sky? Anyways, heres what im trying to say:
« Last Edit: July 15, 2014, 03:30:29 am by Farage »

Offline LeshrotArt

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Re: [WIP] Runner background

Reply #11 on: July 16, 2014, 10:15:52 pm
I'm trying to do in the resolution of 630 x 360 for cell phones.





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Re: [WIP] Runner background

Reply #12 on: July 18, 2014, 10:42:34 pm
New Version, feedback?



Now i'm doing a Guloide. It is a creature created by a friend.

The idea is that it's a cute creature that jump and be greedy.

I don't have many ideas for colors, so i did it white.
I'd want to have some idea of how to make it more fluffy and improve the body, the legs have not pleased me.



PS: It may be bigger than that.
« Last Edit: July 18, 2014, 10:45:10 pm by LeshrotArt »

Offline Fizzick

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Re: [WIP] Runner background

Reply #13 on: July 19, 2014, 03:29:50 am
What's with the bold dudes man

I will post an edit later

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Re: [WIP] Runner background

Reply #14 on: July 20, 2014, 08:04:50 pm

 ;D
some of those clouds were resized or made transparent, which conflicts with the other stuff and makes it not pixel art.

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Re: [WIP] Runner background

Reply #15 on: July 21, 2014, 12:28:57 am
From a gamer perspective, I don't like how the ground and the mountains(walls?) are blocky, while the clouds and the foliage are more organic.

I don't know how to really describe it. But it looks like you are mashing two different styles together.

Offline LeshrotArt

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Re: [WIP] Runner background

Reply #16 on: July 27, 2014, 06:20:07 pm
Thank you all guys, you're great.
I'll change the background for the next version of the game ;)


I need help in this pieces
I think my hay ball and rolling stone isn't very good.




And I have no idea about animations.



I do accept all tips and advices for my Guloide too.

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Re: [WIP] Runner background

Reply #17 on: July 28, 2014, 03:23:47 am
Since when does hay come in balls? And what purpose does it serve in the game?

Good improvement on the character.
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