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Caracticide [C+C]

on: May 24, 2014, 08:10:47 pm
Here's something I've been working on, i'm trying a really minimalistic style using only black and a brightly colored background and as you can see there is no shading. hope you like it :)

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Re: Caracticide [C+C]

Reply #1 on: June 05, 2014, 07:46:50 pm
When it's so heavily stylized (so far away from realism) it's very hard to give any feedback beyond "I like it" or "I don't like it".

A few thoughts:

- I don't know if the Siricide-gentleman is holding a gun or a glass of martini. And I'm not sure if he's holding a sword, a knife or a club.

- The viking horns are too close together, they look like Hyperion's helmet in Immortals.

- I don't understand what the Viking is carrying or what's in front of his face, and the ribbons on the axe don't work very well.

- I think you should reconsider the Ninjicide colour, it doesn't match the others very well, IMO. And maybe a thicker hilt would make it easier to recognise the katana as a katana :)

Hope this helps.

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Re: Caracticide [C+C]

Reply #2 on: June 10, 2014, 06:07:33 am
Thanks a lot dude, ill change it, and improve it :)