platform game sprite [C+C]

[Nameless Force]

Player character for a platform game.  Girl, age 15.  Colours based on a palette by Dawnbringer.  Critique welcome.

[cels]

I'm so bad at this. But I'll give it a shot.



Changes made:

- Changed her hair back to how I imagine you had it in the first place
- Changed the shadows on her pants
- Lowered the boobs, tried to make them a bit round. Square boobs just look like muscles.
- Changed the light direction on the ear
- Added some shade around her eyes and under her hair
- One change that someone with more wisdomz should probably comment on, is what I've done to the color ramp used on her top. I don't like grey as a shade to blue, because it kind of looks warmer to me (having less blue and more of every other colour in it). Maybe I've got that wrong.
- Changed her shoe colour because I just wanted to add a bit of character and I got bored

[HarveyDentMustDie]

Here is my edit. I didn't change any color. I don't think it's perfect, but I like it, it reminds me a bit to a chipmunk.