Hello again, and help + C&C

[Parkerbaby]

Idk, this is how I would try to approach it, but I always have difficulties with colors and using outlines partly seems to help.

[Crow]

Decided to get rid of the unproductive posts in here anyway. Carry on~

[PixelPiledriver]

Get into the habit of designing the same character at least 10 times or so.
While a simple design is fine, visually you could vary the re use and groups of colors more.