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female face - wip

on: July 25, 2006, 10:42:15 pm
I don't get many responses here usually but whatever, heres a new image.. please dont be too negative..



Made a bit more progress... tis now a sword (with only basic colouring atm)


Im going to try add a sprite of this character in the bottom right.. then add in a background.. detail the border.. finish the hair (as thats only roughly drawn out too..) and touch up anything that doesn't look right  8)


?? background ??
« Last Edit: July 26, 2006, 04:03:49 am by Terley »
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Re: female face - wip

Reply #1 on: July 25, 2006, 10:49:33 pm
I'd like to see it without that signature stuff on it. Because from what I can see it looks prett good.

Her shoulder seems kind of odd, unfinished?

Do you have a copy without that stuff on it?
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Re: female face - wip

Reply #2 on: July 25, 2006, 10:52:00 pm
Hey good work, i like very much the hair and the AA.

But seems unifinished not¿?

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Re: female face - wip

Reply #3 on: July 25, 2006, 11:03:23 pm
It looks nice, really love the smooth dithering on the cheeks and the eyes are very 'challenging'.
A few points that can be improved:
1. Eyes don't look at the camera, destroys the 'challenging' way they look. Bummer!
2. The hair looks a bit dull, the shininess of that highlight comes out of nowhere (if you compare with the rest of the hair). Maybe you could make the second lightest shade brighter.
3. Seems like you forgot to do her sholder? It's still in line art.
4. Yes, somethings missing. Maybe you need to decorate the piece a bit. Flowers, candy, blood, whatever.
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Re: female face - wip

Reply #4 on: July 25, 2006, 11:09:48 pm
before anyone else posts, its a work-in-progress..  :-[ some parts still aren't done yet..

I worked on it from the original linework



any ideas on wht else to add ??
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Re: female face - wip

Reply #5 on: July 25, 2006, 11:25:09 pm
Holy crap, you're Terley?

I wondered how an artist so talented unexpectedly popped up on TIF.

That explains it.
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Re: female face - wip

Reply #6 on: July 25, 2006, 11:38:33 pm
oh cheers gs, im not tryin to be sneeky.. im just using another alias till my Terley account is unbanned.. im on a temporary ban for admitting to sharing runescape accounts with my brother.. even tho i havn't played for years and years.  :-X

you wont get rid of me that easily  :D
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Re: female face - wip

Reply #7 on: July 26, 2006, 04:03:22 am
little update from various comments..

oh anyone like this idea for a background? kinda suits it I thinks, but I'll decide tmz when I continue ..

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Re: female face - wip

Reply #8 on: July 26, 2006, 04:16:53 am
i really like the colours in this, but with the latest update I see no reason to keep the bar running down the piece.

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Re: female face - wip

Reply #9 on: July 26, 2006, 04:26:09 am
its a sword  :-\..

an unfinished sword..

forget about convincing me to get rid of it and spend hours constructing the rest of the face. I like it like that  >:(
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