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hello :D

on: August 28, 2005, 11:52:06 pm
latest thing i've been working on

got some really good crits at pixeljoint and stuff :D
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Re: hello :D

Reply #1 on: August 29, 2005, 01:38:21 am
Hello. These are good.

*selout. Too much to go from pure white to pure black and then to white again. Take a step off of it where it's hit by light.

*Neat palette. Especially love the big face one.

*fourth from the right, the neck has a bulge. Iron it out pretty easily though.

*second from the right: leaning forward too much. Move everything from the waist up two pixels to the right, and then from the neck up, another pixel.

*third from the right: the vertical line on the right foot doesn't do it in 3/4ish perspective. Add a curve like on the front view to the kimono. Also, sword scabbard should be a few pixels more foreshortened, given the second one.

*fourth from the right: sleeves of uneven length, and the right one curves out about 2 to 3 pixels too much. Reign it in a bit.


That's it. I love how it's cartoony, but shaded like a fighter sprite, so to speak. Nice work. Post more, please. Have a goat.

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Re: hello :D

Reply #2 on: August 29, 2005, 01:58:17 am
:D i'm gonna work on those crits tomorrow, right now i'm working on a attack stance how's this?
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Re: hello :D

Reply #3 on: August 29, 2005, 02:31:55 am
That perfectly diagonal line on this robe covering (our) right leg bugs me a little. But since you have that perfectly horizontal line on (our) left arm, I guess it adds to the style. Very nice stance btw.  :P

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Re: hello :D

Reply #4 on: August 30, 2005, 01:01:01 am
Love them all. No real crits that haven't been stated, except for his face on the attack stance. Something about it is really bugging me. Also, aren't you bear on most other forums?
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Re: hello :D

Reply #5 on: August 30, 2005, 01:14:48 am
I think the text under his avatar confirms that, don't you? ;D
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Re: hello :D

Reply #6 on: August 30, 2005, 01:34:57 am
here's another one

right right, there was a topic i made for this at pixel joint which had a bunch of good crits and edit's that helped a lot :D
http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=730&PN=1
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Re: hello :D

Reply #7 on: August 30, 2005, 10:18:43 pm
Oops, didn't notice it under the avatar :-[ anyway, love the new addition, just his pants seem weird.
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Re: hello :D

Reply #8 on: August 30, 2005, 10:23:58 pm
^ Those aren't pants :P It's a robe.

Nice position consept. Except the the sword view/angle/length is messed up on that last attack update.  :(

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Re: hello :D

Reply #9 on: August 30, 2005, 11:04:30 pm
I know what it is, I just said pants so he could tell where
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Re: hello :D

Reply #10 on: September 01, 2005, 12:16:45 am
Its a toga!  Lol jk.  =]  Anyway, use a black background.  Because you used AA from the inside from white to black it make the lines appear thick in some places and thin in others.  A black or dark background would solve that.  Also didn't Benny Frank have glasses?  Lolz. 
EDIT: Just noticed don't know if it was said or not in your first post 2nd SJ from the left his robe fold would be over one two or three pixel.  As you drew it's not in the middle it's offset to the left.

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