AuthorTopic: [WIP]Character (Feedback and Help please)  (Read 8154 times)

Offline Kamillo

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Re: [WIP]Character (Feedback and Help please)

Reply #10 on: February 27, 2014, 09:41:29 pm
thanks for the help all here is a little update a jump animation and a bit work on the characters.

i hope i do it better now i tried to use your feedback and work with them.

@Xedrai hahaha your right, my fail :D

@HarveyDentMustDie
i really thank ya for your help i try to work on the colortable but its not easy. i hope this time its better.

@Coltrane your right i need to get off this robin hood archer.


« Last Edit: February 28, 2014, 06:52:43 am by Kamillo »

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Re: [WIP]Character (Feedback and Help please)

Reply #11 on: February 28, 2014, 07:36:11 pm
The exclamation bubble doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the characters very well. Maybe you could try outlining it in a lighter shade, or shading it a bit?
Then again that might destroy the cartoonyness of the bubble or make it harder to see.


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Re: [WIP]Character (Feedback and Help please)

Reply #12 on: March 01, 2014, 02:32:02 pm
@ Kamillo
You should post only original size images, you can zoom in by clicking on them. :)

I don't like your new bully dog(or pig), he have punk rock outfit which don't mach with the rest of your characters, also his face is bad, it's hard to read.

Rabbits face while he's being captured is very good. :y:

Give us some details, about characters. Who are they, what is their purpose etc. I have a feeling that you don't have precise idea yet, so you create random characters. You should plan out at least first stage of your game (demo stage) and start to make character by character, object by object...