AuthorTopic: GR#170 - X-Men Clone Wars Mockup - Sideview Gameart, Animation  (Read 11423 times)

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Re: X-Men Clone Wars Mockup [C+C] (animation)

Reply #10 on: February 16, 2014, 11:34:12 pm
Sentinels head is better now. You have some flickering pixels on left side of his mouth, that flicker along with lights, I don't suppose that this was left on purpose. Also do you need those low lights (near the ground) on every pillar. Maybe they would have more impact if they aren't so symmetrically positioned. Try to skip some of them.

About Wolverine portrait, I said that it's not the same costume, and I gave you the reference to suggest his facial expression not entire look. Maybe you can make couple profiles, depending on his health level. I know it's not very original idea, but it could be very interesting detail.

I like new stance, next time you should post it along with background, and it would be interesting to see still animation for it.  :)

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Re: X-Men Clone Wars Mockup [C+C] (animation)

Reply #11 on: February 17, 2014, 04:57:59 pm
i'm thinking you should ake the mouth'sentinel smaller, like this :



Your version is open even under eyes, but it's just feeling ^^

Eyes could be smaller (and light too)

Btw great job !

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Re: X-Men Clone Wars Mockup [C+C] (animation)

Reply #12 on: February 24, 2014, 12:29:37 pm

Here's a quick and dirty edit to show how I think Wolverine's pose can be improved.
Hope it helps.