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Renkujo - One of the cast of warriors

on: July 21, 2006, 06:16:08 am
Another redo of an old peice. C & C are appriciated.

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I'm really proud of myself for finishing this peice. The pose was very hard to set up and coloring the pants was such a pain in the ass, that I almost gave up on it. I'm really glad I didn't. I used these sprites as references and for help.



The sword is still WIP. I still need to finish it, but I'm not sure to approach it.




« Last Edit: July 22, 2006, 11:46:49 pm by Ro83rt »

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Re: Renkujo - One of the cast of warriors

Reply #1 on: July 21, 2006, 06:23:40 am
images arent showing up ???

http://www.imageshack.us/ perhaps?
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Re: Renkujo - One of the cast of warriors

Reply #2 on: July 21, 2006, 07:57:54 am
hey

Lol, when the page first loaded, all I saw was the two Last Blade sprites/animations... and I thought they were yours... and I was totally blown away beyond beleif, hehe :D. Anyhows after reloading the page, your sprites have now appeared :).

I must say, I like the design... hmm, you seem to design quite alot of nice sprites :P. I do think there is some depth missing, mainly in the legs/pants :-\. Another thing is that I think you should curve the outlines of the pants along with the folds (if that makes any sense), as it looks odd to me without this. Also, it seems odd to me that the bottom of the pants are so flat?

Finally, it's nice to see you improving :).

edit: I just realised that I think the folds in the pants look very stiff and too strait or something???, and the definition/shading of the folds seems odd to me, and hard to make sense of. Checkout the Last Blade sprites, and see the nice flow of folds. BTW, if you like I will do an edit to try and help? Hmm, well maybe I will do one and post if you are having trouble?

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« Last Edit: July 21, 2006, 08:12:22 am by yosh64 »

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Re: Renkujo - One of the cast of warriors

Reply #3 on: July 21, 2006, 11:24:36 am
Sorry, host might be acting up. I'll fix it soon. Try refreshing the page.

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Re: Renkujo - One of the cast of warriors

Reply #4 on: July 21, 2006, 03:25:14 pm
Zantetsuuu...*drools*
nothing of yours is showing...:/
EDIT: it's cool, the only problem i see is his left hand...it looks oddly bent. look at zantetsu's left sleeved  arm when he lifts it, it looks sharper, as opposed to the curve your character's arm has...
but i like your shading on this.:)
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Re: Renkujo - One of the cast of warriors

Reply #5 on: July 21, 2006, 06:14:51 pm
Tried a different host. An made an edit based on Yosh's suggestions. Thanks.
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Re: Renkujo - One of the cast of warriors

Reply #6 on: July 22, 2006, 11:51:02 pm
Rabidbaboy, I don't really understand what you mean.