AuthorTopic: In-Space....What its a space ship :D C + C  (Read 1635 times)

Offline fire4me2hawk

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In-Space....What its a space ship :D C + C

on: January 15, 2014, 03:45:53 pm
Well, Hi everyone :D First post here got redirected by my friend who said i'd get a lot more help here and anyways he taught me the basics but now I need some help as this is my 3rd pixal art work so any tips?
(trying to stay in the 16 pixel color limit)




Far away

http://prntscr.com/2jgwfh

EDIT:
Tried Imgur.com to upload but didn't work or is it just me?
« Last Edit: January 15, 2014, 04:02:05 pm by fire4me2hawk »

Offline netmancer

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Re: In-Space....What its a space ship :D C + C

Reply #1 on: January 15, 2014, 07:19:47 pm

I brightened it up a bit, and made all the lighting come from the front instead of the tiny bit you had brighter at the back. I think you have a very nice piece you just want to make sure all the lighting comes from one way. Otherwise i don't have anymore criticism for this ship except make more  :).

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Re: In-Space....What its a space ship :D C + C

Reply #2 on: January 16, 2014, 01:05:28 am

I brightened it up a bit, and made all the lighting come from the front instead of the tiny bit you had brighter at the back. I think you have a very nice piece you just want to make sure all the lighting comes from one way. Otherwise i don't have anymore criticism for this ship except make more  :).
Well I was wondering why I got so many views yet barely any replies :)
Yeah the lighting is something i'm gonna have to work on but you can expect me posting up more of my ships on here :) (Making a top down space shooter game ;D)
Thanks for the reply though!

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And the edit too :D