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A little help here: How to improve this? C+C

on: December 01, 2013, 11:06:30 pm

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Re: A little help here: How to improve this? C+C

Reply #1 on: December 02, 2013, 12:09:13 am
Looks pretty solid so far.
Some stuff:
His right arm seems too short, and also lift his right pec slightly up, along with his deltoid
Add creases on the waist area; where his leg is lifted. This goes both for the cloth, such as the blue band around his waist, and the waist itself.
His left calf looks pretty weird, too bulky on the side of the foot.
His right knee also looks weird, move it a tiny bit left.
Right part of pants should be pulled back more because of gravity.

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Re: A little help here: How to improve this? C+C

Reply #2 on: December 04, 2013, 01:32:17 pm
he should be leaning right a bit to make him balance instead of unbalanced vertical line u have niw

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Re: A little help here: How to improve this? C+C

Reply #3 on: December 06, 2013, 01:49:26 pm
Maybe his torso should be a turned a little bit more outwards, especially the upper part?
And the outline of the right pectoral muscle seems a bit pillow-shaded to me...

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Re: A little help here: How to improve this? C+C

Reply #4 on: December 06, 2013, 06:50:27 pm
Hello,

Cool character :) I tried an edit. Made some adjustments to anatomy and body proportions but I just eyeballed it so it's still not right. His right shin looks too long for instance. It's good to use lots of anatomy references. Watch out for inconsistent light sources, in some places light seems to come from above, in other places from below.

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