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FRAWG
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Ribbit Ribbit
Frog WIP
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October 15, 2013, 04:12:56 pm
So I took a bit of a break from my game tiles and started this little guy. I know there's a bit of anti-aliasing issues all over the place, but I Want to know what you guys think
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Charlieton
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awkward dancer
Re: Frog WIP
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October 15, 2013, 04:30:39 pm
First thoughts: there's staircase banding on the left arm, and the hat's shape is very ambiguous. More deliberate use of shading and contrast could make the hat more defined.
Very charming design! Also, good colour choices.
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Det skulle vara lätt för mig att säga att jag inte gillar dig, men det gör jag; tror jag
FRAWG
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Ribbit Ribbit
Re: Frog WIP
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October 16, 2013, 12:29:51 am
So this is what it has become so far. I feel like I have stepped forwards in a few areas and backwards in a few more.
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VinceBetteridge
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Re: Frog WIP
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October 16, 2013, 12:54:24 am
His left leg highlight is suggesting he has no tummy at all.
The old version of his... what's it called... Throat Sac seemed to better define its roundness. It still can use some of that darker shade you added in the new version, though.
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Facet
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Re: Frog WIP
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October 16, 2013, 11:59:32 pm
I think I like it a lot
I would just ditch the AA personally; stuff like the chewed grass is getting bloated and it just isn't necessary. The solid shadow is a bit inconsistent; I'd swap it out for nice big flat bits of more the local colours like under the hat brim.
Some ideas: Frogs often have this Popeye fore/arm proportion thing going on, and bandy legs. I also really want him to be a fly rancher.
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