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Offline birkka

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run cycle 16 frame help

on: July 22, 2013, 04:20:03 pm
hello again

I make a 16 frame run cycle and I need your  critiques and comments





thanks for helping me
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Re: run cycle 16 frame help

Reply #1 on: July 22, 2013, 04:32:46 pm
His neck slightly extends and retracts.

Light source apparent on legs seems to shift around.

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Re: run cycle 16 frame help

Reply #2 on: July 23, 2013, 08:14:15 am
The timing's kind of strange - I feel like the beginning and end of each arc should be slower (less movement), and the middle should be faster (more movement).

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Re: run cycle 16 frame help

Reply #3 on: July 24, 2013, 06:20:01 am
fix some little problems