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Prototype- game for my daughter

on: July 07, 2013, 03:53:53 pm
the time back, i've posted here a good numbers of content graphics about this projetct, but because of rollback i lost all

recommencing~~

Animation of Main Char-

some things-

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Re: Prototype- game for my daughter

Reply #1 on: July 08, 2013, 05:12:29 pm
Those trees don't really seem to be that spherical and they seem to not be shaded very well.  ???
Also there seems to be an inconsistant light source.
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Re: Prototype- game for my daughter

Reply #2 on: July 09, 2013, 07:41:57 am
My #1 concern with those tree is the way branches look like a stand for the canopy. they will sub-divide hidden from our eyes, so imho, they should not go beyond the central third of the canopy's size.

As for spherical and shading, trees often give the viewer a flat look because they have irregular shape, so I wouldn't mind they'd look non-spherical here. At best, you'd have clusters of leaves that are in the shadow. I'm more concerned with the inconsistent light source amongst the character and level elements.

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Re: Prototype- game for my daughter

Reply #3 on: July 11, 2013, 02:36:51 pm
I feel as if her head should be bobbing exactly the opposite way, away from the "front" shoulder

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Re: Prototype- game for my daughter

Reply #4 on: July 11, 2013, 02:44:11 pm
I feel as if her head should be bobbing exactly the opposite way, away from the "front" shoulder
Yes for a walk, where the head is higher in the "passing" frame, but for a run, it make sense that your body is higher when your in-air and that your knee bend more during, making the torso and head lower. Plus, the neck and spine will have to dampen the "landing" too, reinforcing the effect.

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Re: Prototype- game for my daughter

Reply #5 on: July 11, 2013, 02:45:03 pm
I feel as if her head should be bobbing exactly the opposite way, away from the "front" shoulder

Looks right to me, but a real animator will get up and skip around like a little girl to see what feels right.   :lol:

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Re: Prototype- game for my daughter

Reply #6 on: July 12, 2013, 07:01:33 pm
 . . . so glad I'm not camera acting out my own animations . . . we're talkin' blackmail level stuff . . .

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Re: Prototype- game for my daughter

Reply #7 on: July 14, 2013, 06:57:51 am
thanks ;D! About the animation i think that is better leave go after ???, then now about the shadows/lighting,i am trying do  better, also redid the main char and the life bar and portrait "portrait by coffe :o edit about my portrait and re-edit now :huh:...by me :P"

thanks! tips and hints are wellcome.   :)

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