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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #20 on: May 27, 2013, 05:10:39 pm
(sorry for my english)

this one is more bouncy ( i wish) 
the front leg les extended
the head don't move

update





evolution
« Last Edit: May 27, 2013, 05:16:59 pm by birkka »

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #21 on: May 27, 2013, 10:10:08 pm
You had so much bounce in your first version. What happened?
Try making it so when he steps off his foot he pushes up quickly to highest height, then holds for a frame then drops down just before he pushes off with the next foot. Then play around with smoothing that out a little but make the push off the foot the most sudden change.
Once you have this movement right, it should be easy to animate the air based on this bouncing movement.

The belt tail looks too stiff.
You could make it flow like in curves like waves instead so it looks like cloth.
Again, I think let the waves flow from the body movement for best effect.

Also slow down the idle animation. Even if he is breathing heavily from running alot, he would hyperventilate from breathing that fast  :lol:
Again the belt tail sticks out strangely instead of hanging down.
« Last Edit: May 27, 2013, 11:10:05 pm by Decroded »

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #22 on: May 28, 2013, 09:21:13 am
I think the problem (or a problem) with the running animation might be that the legs need to extend more and the heels need to touch the ground. The heels are usually the first thing down but here is feels like he's running on his tiptoes.

The head turns towards the viewer but when the body rotates an equal amount in the other direction his head remains straight. Try turning his head to his right.

And I agree with Decroded, the transistion animation, and the Idle animation for that matter, need to me slowed down. At this point he's just breathing. Very subtle movements that serve as a way to give a bit of life to a otherwise static image.

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #23 on: May 28, 2013, 10:32:58 am



more bounce
redraw the belt
the back leg is now longer


todo list

make the hair move with the  bounce
make the head move correctly
« Last Edit: May 28, 2013, 10:34:36 am by birkka »

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #24 on: May 28, 2013, 12:14:00 pm
run cycle evolution







idle evolution




« Last Edit: May 28, 2013, 12:15:37 pm by birkka »

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #25 on: May 28, 2013, 06:32:06 pm
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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #26 on: May 28, 2013, 07:44:06 pm
there's a significant difference in the knee heights for the two legs ... that's fairly unusual.

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #27 on: May 29, 2013, 07:52:39 am
   =====> 



it is better now?
« Last Edit: May 29, 2013, 07:58:17 am by birkka »

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #28 on: May 30, 2013, 10:22:48 am
idle :                         
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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #29 on: May 31, 2013, 09:43:56 am
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