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help me for make it better

on: May 21, 2013, 08:39:12 am
Hello i'm working on this actually


And i want to make it better and more realistic

could you give me some tricks or help

Thank's

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« Last Edit: May 22, 2013, 08:34:31 am by birkka »

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #1 on: May 22, 2013, 01:15:14 am
Hey this is cool, that lanky dude has some long legs :lol:

Elbow on back arm can be more bent and can play with raising it, currently looks like it is just flopping behind.
Can use an extra frame after front arm is fully forward where his arm hooks into his body a little (close to chest) which should smooth animation out a bit too.
His hair looks like an undercut, which would have quite alot of bounce so let it flop up and down  :y:
Turning head from side to side a little is good if you can work it out.

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #2 on: May 22, 2013, 07:28:03 am
thank's :)

but it's no hair  this is something like ( i try to do ...)


this version was better ?





I'm sorry for my bad english T_T

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #3 on: May 22, 2013, 07:31:53 am
a grown up tintin ?

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #4 on: May 22, 2013, 07:46:33 am
no

but i use this as exemple

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #5 on: May 24, 2013, 12:13:21 pm
Hello  I rebuild anything

IDLE :

RUN cycle :

IDLE + transition + run :



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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #6 on: May 24, 2013, 01:09:20 pm
the head seems very small and round compared to the rest of the body, imho.

Beside that, you've got very nice animated shading on the clothes. Maybe you could lessen (lighten) the artline, especially those defining the arm against the  torso.

I'll leave the animation to animation experts. I just got the feeling that this run cycle has room for more in-air frames.
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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #7 on: May 24, 2013, 01:48:06 pm
He looks like some kind of animal, maybe a dog with the jaw and nose sticking out so much.
His head also seems to be sticking out too much from his shoulders.

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #8 on: May 24, 2013, 01:53:56 pm
I reckon its awesome, reminds me of this guy  :lol:


But seriously birkka, I do like this please keep going.  :y:
Not sure whats going on in the idle animation, slow it down a bit and get that hand on the right moving too.

Running animation could use an extra frame when closes hand is fully extended, as it stops to come back.
It looks like its bouncing back at the moment so smooth it out and show some deceleration.

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Re: help me for make it better

Reply #9 on: May 24, 2013, 02:33:02 pm
I can't manage to make him a head