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Offline PunkRockGrrl

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[WIP] Jenny In Space!

on: March 30, 2013, 02:08:46 pm
Hey all.
I'm starting on a platformer/shoot-em-up with a sci-fi/space theme. Here I've got the main character, a daring and independent girl named Jenny.



Any advice, critique, comments, criticism, and other such feedback are welcome and would be GREATLY appreciated.

edit: oh yeah, I forgot to mention that the character will pretty much always be on a black background.
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Re: [WIP] Jenny In Space!

Reply #1 on: April 18, 2013, 04:14:22 am
The darkest blue on her pants is hard to read against black at 1x.



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Re: [WIP] Jenny In Space!

Reply #2 on: April 18, 2013, 06:33:46 am
yeah, I'd definitely make it more contrasty if she's going to be over a black background, but it would help if you could give a frame of reference so that we know what it will look like when the game is full screened
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