Zelda Pinup [Nudity]

[IvanX]

Longtime no post

So this was an old sketch I had lying around that I wanted to expand upon, or rather, this is when I've expanded too. Drasticly better than my sketch :p.
Now before I take this further, I want to see if you all can help me by pointing out any glaring issues you might noticed



Thank you and good day.

[PixelPiledriver]

Cool.
I always like your posts.

She has intensely good posture for the pose, but it depends on how exaggerated you want it to be.
Try to box your surfaces more definitely to show sides.
Some parts are flattening out like the face/thigh/hip/shoulder area.
A bit of bounce light could also help to round her out, like the left side of her back/inner thigh/forearm/ lower leg.





Ignore all the other messy crap I added.

[IvanX]

Cool.
I always like your posts.

Senpai noticed me!   
That being said, I'm really digging your edit, especially the bounce lighting and that posture.


I was stuck between wanting to keep the original posture and experimenting with a slacker position until I ended with this in between.
Now my biggest concern right now is those god awful hands and feet. I'm really having trouble keeping them pretty and readable.
Again, any input is appreciated.

[Crow]

I like the hands. Feet (or foot, rather):


Not sure.. I think that's a tad prettier, but is it still as readable? I wonder.

[Avangion]

Hey, newcomer here so you can take my opinion with a grain of salt. I like the more relaxed posture better. It feels more natural and comfortable, and honestly I don't think the arched back makes her more attractive in this case.

[Sinkin]

I like this. Though I think you need a bit more contrast in your palette, like this;

It makes everything a bit more readable.