Cool.
I always like your posts.
She has intensely good posture for the pose, but it depends on how exaggerated you want it to be.
Try to box your surfaces more definitely to show sides.
Some parts are flattening out like the face/thigh/hip/shoulder area.
A bit of bounce light could also help to round her out, like the left side of her back/inner thigh/forearm/ lower leg.
Ignore all the other messy crap I added.
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