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(C&C Needed)Syosa Inspired

on: March 08, 2013, 04:19:24 pm


Today when I was browsing PixelJoint gallery I found this piece by Syosa: http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/54100.htm

I have bought my brand new Bamboo One tablet and wanted t get used to it.

I've used Dawnbringer's palette for this piece. Please help me making this better

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Re: (C&C Needed)Syosa Inspired

Reply #1 on: March 09, 2013, 01:37:35 pm
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Re: (C&C Needed)Syosa Inspired

Reply #2 on: March 09, 2013, 07:19:42 pm
A lot better, but look at the proportions.
The head is huge, the overarm is really short.
The entire body is quite short and the way she is holding the gun looks really strange.

Also, I think the bottom part of the dress looked much better when it was torn..
And now the animation looks jiggly, the gun recoil looked much better in the first one.