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Offline AlexHW

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Re: A Robotic Armed Person? *Updated*

Reply #10 on: June 29, 2006, 06:10:06 am
heres an edit, maybe it will help you.
mostly did some anatomy edits and also messed with the robot arm.
no colors were added or changed.
« Last Edit: June 29, 2006, 06:12:49 am by Alex Hanson-White »

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Re: A Robotic Armed Person? *Updated*

Reply #11 on: June 29, 2006, 01:48:56 pm
 Nice edit there. There's one problem is the metal shading. When shading metal, I wouldn't make the tones stacked together. I would make them more further apart. The contrast is good. I'ld leave the contrast there.

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Re: A Robotic Armed Person? *Updated*

Reply #12 on: June 29, 2006, 06:28:45 pm
Considering he didn't add any colours I'd say that is one hell of an edit and certainly does fix a lot of the issues.

I'd study this one hard if I was you iEmo.

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Re: A Robotic Armed Person? *Updated*

Reply #13 on: June 29, 2006, 08:26:33 pm
Yes, that is a phenomenal edit. The shading on the torso is ace, as is the arm. Also corrects the anatomical flaws, far as I can tell.

As to the piece as a whole, I'd alter the pants a bit, make them not so... skin tight. Not that there's a problem with skin tight pants, it's just that if they were even a tiny bit baggier (say around the crotch/ankles, for example) the resulting folds'd make the lower body more eye catching.

Good stuff, keep at it.

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Re: A Robotic Armed Person? *Updated*

Reply #14 on: June 29, 2006, 08:37:42 pm
Awesome edit right there.
iEmo, your original arm needs to look more robot-y, not like you took the arm and covered it in metal.