AuthorTopic: Scavengers in Sillhoutte - WIP  (Read 5009 times)

Offline Applzor

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Re: Scavengers in Sillhoutte - WIP

Reply #10 on: January 29, 2013, 05:47:10 am
I'm a bit confused, do you want to make the window a bit smoother? If so why not use the colour you've already used on the side of the building?

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Re: Scavengers in Sillhoutte - WIP

Reply #11 on: January 30, 2013, 10:12:25 pm
That's the same shade as is in the window, but nvm I guess it doesn't look too bad.

Any more suggestions would be greatly appreciated before I submit it to PJ.

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Re: Scavengers in Sillhoutte - WIP

Reply #12 on: January 30, 2013, 10:21:34 pm
Is there any huge significance to that red-and-orange sign on the left?  If not, I'd really suggest either removing it or making it much more subtle by making it purple-hued like the rest of the scene -- I find it to be a huge distraction in its current form.  The first thing my eyes are drawn to when I see the piece now is the sign, and my eyes keep on making their way back to it.  If you're going to make a part of the scene stand out by creating significant color contrast, I'd think it'd be primarily with the two scavengers.  I was also a bigger fan of the earlier, dark blue color edit, but I guess that's just personal taste and has less to do with the composition.

I think you did a good job on this -- it looks very nice  :)
« Last Edit: January 30, 2013, 10:23:38 pm by Ashbad »

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Re: Scavengers in Sillhoutte - WIP

Reply #13 on: January 30, 2013, 11:31:27 pm
Fixed some shadows and reworked palette.


Final thoughts?
« Last Edit: January 30, 2013, 11:35:12 pm by Fizzick »

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Re: Scavengers in Sillhoutte - WIP

Reply #14 on: January 30, 2013, 11:50:33 pm
Det skulle vara lätt för mig att säga att jag inte gillar dig, men det gör jag; tror jag

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Re: Scavengers in Sillhoutte - WIP

Reply #15 on: January 30, 2013, 11:51:11 pm
Very nice work you'v got there bro from the images befoure that I would say thats a major improvement :D

here are some edits Iv did hope you dont mind :D



added some light for the gun the other scavenger was holding and for this one its a personal taste , but I do like the dark scenery more , but that's just me :D
« Last Edit: January 30, 2013, 11:57:37 pm by DOT33102 »

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Re: Scavengers in Sillhoutte - WIP

Reply #16 on: January 31, 2013, 12:13:12 am
Altered the darkness of the background marginally, now uploading to Pixeljoint!
Thanks for C&C, I'll be posting here again soon.  :y: