anyways here is the image id be grateful if any one can tweak it abit and give me some critique just tbh i did use distort effect after i finnished the image
You kind of just made it impossible for anyone to do a pixel-level edit...
Do you have a non-distorted version saved somewhere as well?
Other general critique is that the face/hair don't have any form, and the face is likely far too wide. The face itself doesn't agree with the implied tilt of the head (which is implied by the hair's parting position and flow.) Hard to read, too, but that's possibly just the distort effect at work (I'd highly recommend against using such effects -- pixel art is intended to be clean, and dirty effects completely ruin that.)