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Pumpukin

on: December 08, 2012, 03:06:22 am
I've been letting my pixel-art inspirations fester for a while, and I come back with another attempt!
Sadly Im still having trouble understanding the ramblethread, but I tried to avoid one-pixel clusters for the most part..?

Edit:
Uploading it made me do some more tweaking, very inconvenient.
« Last Edit: December 08, 2012, 03:25:42 am by Ymedron »
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Re: Pumpukin

Reply #1 on: December 08, 2012, 02:04:46 pm
Quick edit:



- Your original colors did have some good color contrast, but it didn't seem to be nearly enough.
- Some of the internal, jaggy near-black lines were detrimental.
- Some noise at the bottom of the pumpkin.

Overall, pretty interesting pixel so far.

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Re: Pumpukin

Reply #2 on: December 08, 2012, 03:12:14 pm
Thank you for the crit. :3
I tried to address those issues using your edit:
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Re: Pumpukin

Reply #3 on: December 18, 2012, 01:24:52 am
Consider rethinking your character design. Not in any drastic way, but it would be nice to discern what sort of emotion the thing might be feeling, which is impossible currently.

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Re: Pumpukin

Reply #4 on: December 19, 2012, 11:18:55 am
Hm, true...
I didn't consider it an actual character while doing it. I'll try to take that into account on my future sprites!
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