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[WIP] Card Battle Game - C+C

on: October 15, 2012, 07:08:13 pm
Uh, just a small project I decided to undertake, with some minor influence from YuGiOh, card wise.

Any C+C is appreciated, although its in a rather WIP phase.

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Re: [WIP] Card Battle Game - C+C

Reply #1 on: October 15, 2012, 07:51:53 pm
I like the very clean and simple card design, and I think you should keep it very simple.  It will contrast the actual graphic inside the card well, especially if you can give a good balance of detail there.  Looking great so far

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Re: [WIP] Card Battle Game - C+C

Reply #2 on: October 16, 2012, 11:24:43 am
Still working on the three main starter deck's lol.

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Re: [WIP] Card Battle Game - C+C

Reply #3 on: October 19, 2012, 12:21:14 am
I agree with Friend, the simple design is great in contrast with the image. I like both the beasties you've got so far. The backgrounds seem a bit empty, though. Keep going!
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Re: [WIP] Card Battle Game - C+C

Reply #4 on: October 20, 2012, 10:09:45 pm
Uh, I finshed quite alot more lately, but I was told that they were rather bland, so I decided to take more time, and actually work at a higher scale.

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Re: [WIP] Card Battle Game - C+C

Reply #5 on: October 20, 2012, 10:51:59 pm
the ears are killing me...you may want to fix those and thats all i gotta say..other than that its good...whats its name

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Re: [WIP] Card Battle Game - C+C

Reply #6 on: October 20, 2012, 11:08:07 pm

Whats wrong with the ears?

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Re: [WIP] Card Battle Game - C+C

Reply #7 on: October 22, 2012, 08:52:07 pm
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Re: [WIP] Card Battle Game - C+C

Reply #8 on: October 22, 2012, 09:06:35 pm
I think the anatomy could use some work, particularly on the third guy. guy1 has a really round pec, almost like it melded with his deltoid. guy2 has small hands and short arms, and the little '+' signs in all of their chests is kinda strange. what sticks out most to me (in all three but especially guys2&3) is the connection between the neck/torso/shoulders. make sure you're aware of the relationship between the deltoid and trapezius, as well as the placement of the collar bones and muscles of the neck. guy3 has a really tiny head and his jaw doesn't reach toward his ear far enough, which I guess you could write off to him being an alien or whatever but it still looks odd. his ear is also crowding the face. his pectoral seems to stretch back too far rather than slope up toward the deltoid and the blue arm is really large, especially the shoulder.