nice to see you persisting, and looks a bit more game suitable.
not sure about that dark blue on the fall. the rocks in the fall look nicely done, maybe a rock or more in the stream above the cliff will work effectively, the river above the fall should be depicted with some flow too. and if you put rocks in remember they will disrupt and cause some break in the currents
something like that, suggesting making the darkest blue lighter and adding a couple more tones to the water to depict more detailed flow
