Wow that's a great improvement in my opinion.
I can imagine myself into your scene much better than before.
Last thing I can see : You can maybe light a little more your character, we don't see it immediatly.
Also the wooden lantern is too symmetrical, geometrically perfect, and we don't see the back wood branchs.
Otherwise it's starting to look pretty solid I think.
I should let the others help you at this point.
Oh by the way, It's really funny, I did almost the exact same picture 5 years ago (unfinished) :
HD version :
http://i.imgur.com/0ynLVFi.jpg
« Last Edit: May 19, 2013, 04:11:55 pm by tim »
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