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Reign of Anguish: Art Dump

on: August 01, 2012, 01:47:49 pm


Hello all! Surprised by the scale of the art posted? So am I. I didn't know I had made that much for Reign of Anguish, a game by Lige which was abandoned. So, I thought to post all the art, just to get comments and critiques to improve in all the aspects of art and hence leveling up my artistic skills =).

If you use any of the art from this, please post the link to the game you've used this art as a comment in this post and please give me credits for using the art; I'd love to see who used my art and in which game :D.

Thanking everyone for reading this and commenting/critiquing(if).

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Re: Reign of Anguish: Art Dump

Reply #1 on: August 03, 2012, 11:59:36 am
Aww, no comments or critiques?  :-[

I know it's a foolish decision to post all the icons of a game here but I wanted to improve at every aspect of the game. Please help me by providing critique on any of the pieces you feel need work.
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Re: Reign of Anguish: Art Dump

Reply #2 on: August 03, 2012, 03:58:46 pm
should probably tighten your layout presentation, and also try putting together a mockup, then we'll have more idea of what works and what doesn't together and it'd be easier to offer critique,

one thing I noticed is the AA on a few things is absent or poor, for example on your mana indicators the grey on blue AA at the bottom doesn't work, you should try using an AA colour that's roughly half way between each colour you are AA'ing

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Re: Reign of Anguish: Art Dump

Reply #3 on: August 05, 2012, 01:02:39 am
They are very noisy, try comparing the tree to the stones.
You should use roughly the same method for the stones, drawing larger blobs that better defines the shape.

Also, your colors look kinda off to me. For the character sprites, try a warmer skin color.
The berserker is also quite hard to read.
The face of the ranger as well, her hair and pants are quite noisy too..
And her feet are angled really strange, which I think will look very odd when animated.
The goblins legs are too thin..

When I have the time I'll try doing some edits if you need :)