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(robot) C+C

on: July 20, 2012, 01:40:04 pm

i have this old work and i need i review
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Re: (robot) C+C

Reply #1 on: July 25, 2012, 09:58:20 pm
looks pretty cool. I like the colors you are using.
I'd say maybe work on your lightsource..
you seem to be using some shapes that are round, but the shading on them is off a little.. check this page out: http://www.itchy-animation.co.uk/light.htm

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Re: (robot) C+C

Reply #2 on: July 26, 2012, 07:35:13 pm
tanx for the tips! i will try to remake the light and i will work more on shades
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Re: (robot) C+C

Reply #3 on: July 29, 2012, 02:38:06 am
well something I did awhile ago, but when I got around to posting the site went down  :ouch:

I think the colours and lighting could use some work, I think the dingy green yellow doesn't look very flattering on most things  :blind:

this is probably too gold, but quick colour edit, then a quick resprite to illustrate what it'd look like with more toon style shading

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Re: (robot) C+C

Reply #4 on: August 01, 2012, 07:15:16 pm
well i will try to remake this old robot
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