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Rundown Apartment

on: July 16, 2012, 02:15:32 pm
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/71533.htm

 I would like to know how I can make this more
-Old
-Dirty
-Rundown
Any tips are appreciated

Thank you  :)

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Re: Rundown Apartment

Reply #1 on: July 16, 2012, 04:07:14 pm
well, for a start, your wall cover is way too smooth.Try adding more detail to it rather than having it all the same color.

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Re: Rundown Apartment

Reply #2 on: July 16, 2012, 07:11:57 pm
The steps and door are far too large for the building.

How run down are you trying to go?  Just old?  A fixer upper?  Full Detroit?

Tourist

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Re: Rundown Apartment

Reply #3 on: July 16, 2012, 07:54:36 pm
you should post it here for ease to forum goers



just copy image address from the PJ gallery and IMG tag it here.

bricks don't look like they integrate well, look pasted over, one quick suggestion darken the grout and bricktone on the less lit wall (left side)

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Re: Rundown Apartment

Reply #4 on: July 18, 2012, 02:58:29 pm
The steps and door are far too large for the building.

How run down are you trying to go?  Just old?  A fixer upper?  Full Detroit?

Tourist

Ok ill shrink it down a bit thanks :)
a fixer upper