you didn't really incorporate Pype's crit, and here is a fast example of how you'd most likely shade the ear, it is going into the distance and is not the focal point, so I'd recommend this, also the shape is a bit off so there's a pointer to what would look more appropriate and you should think about the mass of the hair, quick block-in, what is that part highlighted in green? because If it is hair it is at an extremely odd angle in relation to the likely flow of hair, overall the facial shape and anime features are looking a lot tighter since the last WiP you submitted
Ed:
more like this maybe, after looking at my split second scribble hair block in on the submitted edit, i figured it might actually prove counter-intuitive as it doesn't look anatomically correct to the scalp or hair volume, will leave it there to show you what to avoid
