AuthorTopic: GR#103 - Girl - Sprite Process  (Read 10329 times)

Offline Helm

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Re: [WIP]Girl C&C

Reply #10 on: June 16, 2012, 02:18:27 pm
Please consider this edit



I didn't try to conserve on the palette, tell me if you think you'd like that, this image doesn't need more than 16 colors, really.
I also didn't edit it but I have to say boobs touching each other without support (and that shirt doesn't seem to provide support) are not how boobs work -- you might not care about that too much.

I like the expression, good job getting character in there.

You need to work on your human anatomy more even if you plan to abstract in an anime-ish fashion later, though.

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Re: [WIP]Girl C&C

Reply #11 on: June 17, 2012, 01:13:21 am



Thanks helm for the awesome edit. I did like it a lot so I changed mine up a bit. I did keep the light source in the same area though because I think you changed it in your edit. I fixed some anatomy errors as well using yours are references and I tried to fix the tight shirt to make it seem more natural like yours too :D Thanks for that, I would never of thought about doing that either lol.