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Indoor Tiles

on: May 12, 2012, 03:24:51 am
I have been working on them for a while and would appreciate some suggestions.
I think that I did not make the brightness between the top and sides big enough of a difference and the tiles look somewhat washed out.



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Re: Indoor Tiles

Reply #1 on: May 12, 2012, 04:35:36 pm
I think that I did not make the brightness between the top and sides big enough of a difference and the tiles look somewhat washed out.

Yeah..
You really should do something about that. It's the most obvious issue.
The stairs also look rather flat, you need to add more depth by darkening the steps and lighten up the railing.
Also, you should make everything thicker horizontally to further enhance the perspective, stuff like the legs of the table for example. Because it should looked squashed down.
To take the perspective even further I suggest gradient effects like on the book shelf.

Good job on the highlights and the texture!
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Re: Indoor Tiles

Reply #2 on: May 12, 2012, 06:59:39 pm
Made bigger brightness differences between top and side. Redid stairs steps

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Re: Indoor Tiles

Reply #3 on: May 12, 2012, 10:00:37 pm
You need to be way more extreme, I had the same problem too when I started out.
The wood texture is fine, but the outlines, the highlights and some of the shadows need to be a lot darker.
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Re: Indoor Tiles

Reply #4 on: May 14, 2012, 04:11:21 pm
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