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My First Piece(WIP)

on: May 09, 2012, 07:29:29 am



Any advise on improvement(palette, line art, etc) would really be appreciated =)


Also, I am using ASEPRITE for animations which doesn't allow a good color use so if anyone of you could suggest me a good free animation software (can not afford Graphicsgale's premium version or anything like that) it would be really appereciated ^_^
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Re: My First Piece(WIP)

Reply #1 on: May 09, 2012, 08:12:12 am
I won't comment on the animation right now, but I think you are confused about how palettes work in ASEPRITE. You can edit any palette entry value by clicking on the Edit Palette button at the top. You can then switch between RGB and HSB color sliders. Tweak the colors to your heart's content!
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Re: My First Piece(WIP)

Reply #2 on: May 09, 2012, 01:39:30 pm
The animation is a bit stiff when you shoot a gun the arms usually move up to insinuate that a shot has been fired also bend the legs a little or change the pose. Up to you

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Re: My First Piece(WIP)

Reply #3 on: May 14, 2012, 07:07:58 am
Okay so I moved the hands and the legs a bit so try to make it better.




Help me fix the problem(if any)

Thanks in advance once again.
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Re: My First Piece(WIP)

Reply #4 on: May 15, 2012, 04:25:11 am
Made the hair move a bit, I hope this makes the sprite look better?

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Re: My First Piece(WIP)

Reply #5 on: May 15, 2012, 04:56:13 am
You need to get some elbow movement in there. The way he's shooting it looks like he would snap his arms right in half.

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Re: My First Piece(WIP)

Reply #6 on: May 15, 2012, 06:12:09 am
Here it is:
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