AuthorTopic: An avatar for pixel joint. (Updated with a second) !!  (Read 3514 times)

Offline Godslayer

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Well, dish out the pointers! I haven't much to say, besides I really want to improve. ;D
« Last Edit: August 21, 2005, 10:54:17 pm by Godslayer »
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Re: An avatar for pixel joint.

Reply #1 on: August 21, 2005, 07:19:20 pm
Here's a quick edit of the face:

What I did:
Desaturated the skin.
Removed the dithering because it was making the face crowded and blurry.
Changed the shading and the lips.

I hope this helps!

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Re: An avatar for pixel joint.

Reply #2 on: August 21, 2005, 07:31:58 pm
Sweet! Besides looking a bit to much for a monkey for my tastes (wich doesnt matter- it was quick) that seems to be an improvement. I guess I'm hesitant to use skin tones like that because I make the face seem empty. :-\ But on my next piece I'll take this into account.

Thanks!
How long can the floor creak before it loses its voice?

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Re: An avatar for pixel joint. (Updated with a second) !!

Reply #3 on: August 21, 2005, 10:55:02 pm
Heres another one, using some of your crits:



A gift for a freind by the name of Dementedhero.

-EDIT-

Fixed the nose and forehead:

« Last Edit: August 21, 2005, 11:30:43 pm by Godslayer »
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Re: An avatar for pixel joint. (Updated with a second) !!

Reply #4 on: August 22, 2005, 01:18:33 am
I like them, the second one more than the first, and after the edit, I don't really have any crits. Good job overall ;D
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