STFU N00B! - Updated

[JacobRyan]

I was talking to a friend of mine Garry, he was having some problems with some stupid people on a forum, so I did up this little character for him to post.  The face and all that took maybe 20 minutes, the hair took me a considerable amount of time because number one didn't really know how to do it/ didn't know what angle to take.  So, here it is, done, did the hair and all that jazz this morning.  I present to you, "I've had my speaking privleges revoked man. (batteries not included, some assembly may be required).  You can have him for just three easy payments of your soul."


- Old

- New, I redid the hair, tried fixing the face a bit.  Thanks goes to Indigo for major help on the hair.

14 colors including transparency.

[rabidbaboy]

the highlights on the hair look wrong, so wrong.they look like they were randomly placed, like "a little here, here, here, and here...", then were'nt given a second thought.also, the eyes need more expression.make him more angry.the shading on the face looks wrong too, but meh.

[JacobRyan]

I understand about the hair, I used my own hair (which is highlighted to hell) for reference, and the reason his eyes are just -.- is because you can see a look of sadness in his eyes because his rights to speak were taken away and he's just docile.  I'll work on the hair some more, and the shading about the face.  Thanks, anymore critiques would be wonderful.

[rabidbaboy]

nice edit.looks better.also, the mouth looks like a zipper if you look at it this way (tilts head), but i guess that's just a question of style.

[Billeh]

Rabid-It might just be me, but i think its supposed to be a zipper...i mean it is STFU

[rabidbaboy]

oh.my bad then, i though the sprite was saying the stfu.i thought that thing was a speech bubble.

[Cure]

The outline around the zipper is a little dark for my tastes, and the lighter color used around the lettering gives it a less-than-crisp AAed appearance, imho.